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Friday 12 May 2017

my poem


                        CLOUDS


Up on the clouds is white  up on  the sky is Blue
the clouds go around the world
then i see the sky.


When i see the clouds i feel happy
Because it’s  like my nan that i can see up in the sky.  


the clouds turn pink when the sun goes down
i watch the sun go down  i  like it because me and my family watch this together.

 By Brooke Potini

1 comment:

  1. hello my name is Jovahn i am Brookes mother.Reading this poem Brooke put a smile to my face.I like how you have put a lot of love an time into this.you are an amazing girl keep this up Brooke. Amazing and Wonderful!!

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