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Friday 12 May 2017

my summer

When I woke up in The   Morning It was A Bright Sunny Day. Then Me And My Family Decided We Will Go To The Shop And Get Some Ice Cream; Me And My Family Eat A Lot Of Ice Cream.. Because It Was A Very Hot Day We Enjoyed   Eating Our Ice Cream.. We Then Went Home To  Get Our Stuff  And We Put It In The Car Then When We Were Done Getting Our Stuff We Got In The Car And We Went To The Water Hole. Before We Went To The Water Hole We Also Got  Some Lunch Then of We Went To The Swimming Hole.  When  We Got There We Jump Out  Of The Car We Looked At The  Water And Started Running Towards  It. I Put My Feet In The Water  It Was Nice To Me Because It Was A Very Hot Hot Day And The Water Was So Cold. I Then  Went To Jump Of The Top Of The Water Falls.The Water Falls Name Is Waitangi Falls And Its In A Small Town Called Waiuku About 15-20 Minutes From Rosehill,Papakura Where I Live..Back To My Jump It Is A Very Very Exciting And Fun Thing To Do I Love Swimming Under The Sunshine With My Family Surrounding Me And The Fresh Smell Of Nature.  In The Water We Also Love Jumping Of And Doing Big Bombs Having Little Battles With My Family To See Whose Bombs Are The Biggist Its So Much Fun. Alot Of Other families Enjoy Doing Bombs To.I Think My Mum And Dad Do Really Big Bombs It’s Cool Being Around Nature And Swimming In fresh water. Me And My Family Love To Be In The Sunshine Swimming,Eating,Singing Its One Of Our Most Fun And Favourite Things We  Do Alot.. As The Sun Starts To Leave We Pack Up Our Things And Sadly We  Leave Back On Home Where It All Begins My Nice Comfy Blanket And Pj’s Are Waiting For Me..


My Summer Story

By Brooke Te-aroha Potini..

3 comments:

  1. hello my name is Jovahn i am Brookes mother.I"m very pleased to see how hard you are working Brooke i also like how much effort you put into your story great work Brooke. Amazing!!

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  2. thank you miss

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