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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 15 November 2018

peg investagtion


what i learnt: i learnt that when me Jorjia and Azaria was doing the peg investagtion we were getting fatgiue and fatgiue makes you want to stop and have a rest.

what was hard: i think when we were  doing the chart we cloud not get the chart on.

what was easy i think what was easy when we were doing the 30 sc peg thing.


Friday, 19 October 2018

Bacteria and germs

what i learnt was that bacteria is an germ and that it is everywhere  and that bacteria is very very very tiny. 

the hard part was that i had nothing to write about in till sam hleped me.

the easy part was that when sam helped me with my writing. 

the fun part was that i was done fast.




Monday, 24 September 2018

WALT: write a narrative plan



i learned that when i was doing my narrative plan was i good thing to do before you write becaues if you write with out doing a narrative plan you do kown what your going to go write next when your doing your writing.

the hard part was when i had no ideas of thinking about what i was going to put in the boxes when i was doing the narrative plan.

and the easy part was when jorjia will give me some ideas about what i will write in the boxes.

the fun part is when i done doing the narrative plan.

the lame pat is when i need to go and fix my plan up.


Thursday, 13 September 2018

Learning Reflection

i learn the meaning of archimedes and buoyancy .

and the hard part was doing the meaning of buoyancy and arhimesdes .

and the esay part was when aj help us to do the meaning with us .

and the part i hated was when tutu and nov and ken was talking to much and playing a lot of times .

Friday, 12 May 2017

my summer

When I woke up in The   Morning It was A Bright Sunny Day. Then Me And My Family Decided We Will Go To The Shop And Get Some Ice Cream; Me And My Family Eat A Lot Of Ice Cream.. Because It Was A Very Hot Day We Enjoyed   Eating Our Ice Cream.. We Then Went Home To  Get Our Stuff  And We Put It In The Car Then When We Were Done Getting Our Stuff We Got In The Car And We Went To The Water Hole. Before We Went To The Water Hole We Also Got  Some Lunch Then of We Went To The Swimming Hole.  When  We Got There We Jump Out  Of The Car We Looked At The  Water And Started Running Towards  It. I Put My Feet In The Water  It Was Nice To Me Because It Was A Very Hot Hot Day And The Water Was So Cold. I Then  Went To Jump Of The Top Of The Water Falls.The Water Falls Name Is Waitangi Falls And Its In A Small Town Called Waiuku About 15-20 Minutes From Rosehill,Papakura Where I Live..Back To My Jump It Is A Very Very Exciting And Fun Thing To Do I Love Swimming Under The Sunshine With My Family Surrounding Me And The Fresh Smell Of Nature.  In The Water We Also Love Jumping Of And Doing Big Bombs Having Little Battles With My Family To See Whose Bombs Are The Biggist Its So Much Fun. Alot Of Other families Enjoy Doing Bombs To.I Think My Mum And Dad Do Really Big Bombs It’s Cool Being Around Nature And Swimming In fresh water. Me And My Family Love To Be In The Sunshine Swimming,Eating,Singing Its One Of Our Most Fun And Favourite Things We  Do Alot.. As The Sun Starts To Leave We Pack Up Our Things And Sadly We  Leave Back On Home Where It All Begins My Nice Comfy Blanket And Pj’s Are Waiting For Me..


My Summer Story

By Brooke Te-aroha Potini..

my poem


                        CLOUDS


Up on the clouds is white  up on  the sky is Blue
the clouds go around the world
then i see the sky.


When i see the clouds i feel happy
Because it’s  like my nan that i can see up in the sky.  


the clouds turn pink when the sun goes down
i watch the sun go down  i  like it because me and my family watch this together.

 By Brooke Potini