Friday 23 March 2018
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Hi, I am Sophie from Awahono School. I like how you made all the sentences different colours and the font is really cool. Maybe next time make the writing a little bit smaller so that people don't have to keep scrolling down.
ReplyDeleteHi there Brooke, I like how you have written about ice. Just one thing maybe where you write when you post something say what it is about and why you wrote it. That would be very interesting if you did that. Maybe you could check out my blog. I have been posting a lot of writing on it recently. I will leave the link Here: https://paparoarangeblakeg.blogspot.co.nz/
ReplyDeleteHi I am Zoe from Awahono School. I like how you made the fonts different colours but it is really fiddly because it is hard to read but other than that it is the only thing that is the problem.
ReplyDeletethank you zoe so much for that
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